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What makes a community story worth watching?

Writer: Taiwo Korexcalibur
Taiwo Korexcalibur
22 hours ago
4 min read

I've been in two kinds of rooms. In one, a community watches a film about itself and the whole room leans forward, people nudging each other, laughing a beat before the joke lands because they already know it, going still at the part that's true. In the other, a community watches a film about itself and claps politely at the end because that's what you do, then forgets it by the parking lot. Same subject. Same budget, sometimes. Completely different thing.


The former was Groove. Yes, I'm blowing my trumpet.


I've been chewing on that difference lately, because the mirror communities used to have is going dark. This past summer a station in North Carolina aired a documentary called "Left Uncovered," about news deserts; communities that have lost their local paper and, with it, anyone whose job was to notice them. The number under it is hard to sit with: the U.S. has lost roughly 40% of its newspapers in twenty years, from nearly 9,000 down to under 6,000. The producer made a point of saying the film wasn't really about journalists, it was about communities. And one reporter in it put it plainer still: everything's online now, and people feel more lost than ever. WRAL Documentary examines growing number of news deserts nationally and across North Carolina :: WRAL.com +3


That's the backdrop for a question I'm asking myself lately. What makes a community story worth watching? Most people assume the subject does the work. Point a camera at a real neighbourhood, real faces, a real struggle, and surely that's enough.

It isn't.

"Community" is not a genre that guarantees anything. I've watched community stories that were basically brochures, and brochures don't make anyone lean forward.


Here's what I've landed on. A community story is worth watching when the community can recognize itself in it, not the flattering version, not the tragic version, the true one. A couple of my colleagues who watched Groove mentioned to me that they specifically saw themselves is particular characters in the series. That's a narrow target, and most films miss it in one of two directions. Some flatter: they turn a place into a highlight reel, all resilience and golden hour, and everyone in it knows it's a lie because they live there. Some pity: they turn a place into a problem to be solved, and the people become evidence in somebody else's argument. Both are portraits painted from outside. Both earn polite applause and nothing after it.


The ones that land are made from the inside, or with enough patience that the gaze stops feeling like a visitor's. They're specific to the point of discomfort. Not "the community," which is a word that means nobody, but this street, this name, this Tuesday. They let people stay complicated, and remain so: the kind grandmother who's also a little cruel, the failing shop the whole block still roots for.

They trust that the truth a place already carries but rarely hears said out loud will do more than any message you could hand it.


So if you're making one, or paying for one, this is the test I'd hold it to.


Would the people in it feel seen, or used? Show them a cut before anyone else sees it. If they go quiet in the good way, you've got something. If they get careful and start managing how they come across, you've made them a subject instead of a story.


Let people be more than their situation. If someone only exists in the film to illustrate a point, go deeper or cut them. Nobody recognizes themselves in a symbol.


And know what the thing is for. A story has a job. A community story worth the watch usually does one of two: it makes a place feel seen by itself, or it makes a place legible to the people next door who never understood it. Doing neither, it's decoration.


This is most of what I do, and it's why I'm slow about it. The film I'm working on right now follows a filmmaker in Saint John. Not a cause, a person, with all the contradiction that comes with being one. We could've made a tidier version. It would've been easier to fund and nobody would remember it. But being in and out of communities that mostly get described by people who don't live in them, and knowing what it does to that community, being seen properly is a different and needed thing. Rarer, harder, worth the whole effort.

As the local mirrors go dark, as the papers close and the people whose job was to watch a place quietly vanish, I think this work matters more, not less. Somebody has to keep the record. Not the flattering one. The true one, at a resolution only someone who stayed long enough can reach.

If you've got a community story you think is worth telling, the first thing I'll ask won't be about budget. It'll be whether the people in it would recognize themselves. If you already know the answer is yes, we should talk.

 
 
 

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